以小組為單位,每一組繳交一項
期末會有一場社內小模聯,請大家到時候要做好準備
現在只是練習而已,讓大家熟悉一下
以第三組 R.O.C.K. 的為範例:(第三組的不用交作業摟)
1. Organizing some civil body and levying volunteers who can teach refugees skills and train them; they can become human resources of industry; the funds would be from doing fundraising and tax;
當然第一個錯誤就是開頭的Organizing,應該要用原形動詞Organize表示(記得畫底線)
接著是句中有Organizing和 Levying兩個動詞的問題,通常一個clause只會有一個動詞,就是列在clause的最前端又畫了底線的Organize。若需要使用兩個以上的動詞,建議直接分成兩個clause,或者對clause內容作微幅修改(如下)。
1. Organizes certain civil body in ways such as but not limited to:
a. levy volunteers capable of teaching refugee skills,
b. Train refugees to become human resources of industry,
c. Obtain funds with means such as but not limited to:
i. Fundraising,
ii. Tax,
最後貼心小叮嚀:
盡量把每個clause以條列式呈現,然後少用第一、二、三人稱代名詞(I, you we ,they...),以明確名詞替代較佳
盡量把每個clause以條列式呈現,然後少用第一、二、三人稱代名詞(I, you we ,they...),以明確名詞替代較佳
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